Need beta Readers to help keeping me on track
Okay, second rough draft of Chapter 9 is up, I need feedback on it, please. Is this chapter getting too dark? Also, is this becoming too much like my Fallen Angel story? If so, should I change it? (make it a more real life like where people stay dead or keep writing it where a couple of people can never truly die).
I am trying my best to keep Dream Life... ...Storyline different from the Fallen Angel but I do not know if the storylines are starting to run together. I really need help with Dream Life. Comment on my wall or comment in the chapter and share with your friends and let them know that I need all the help I can truly get for this book. Have a great sinful day, night, my Sadomasochist readers