Hi. I don't want to sound rude but may I suggest dividing this one huge paragraph into smaller ones?
Also, would you consider starting the dialogue in a new line whenever the speaker changes?
These would make it easier for the reader to understand and to enjoy your story.
Happy writing :-)
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Roza Csergo 24.07.2019, 00:45:20
Hi. I don't want to sound rude but may I suggest dividing this one huge paragraph into smaller ones?
Also, would you consider starting the dialogue in a new line whenever the speaker changes?
These would make it easier for the reader to understand and to enjoy your story.
Happy writing :-)
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