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Dark Descendants Book 1: City of Domes

Wondercyy

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fantasy, apocalypse, guardians

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Current rating:
#1 at Post-apocalyptic
#1 at Epic fantasy


In progress: 30 Dec 129 pages

Publication: 02.12.2018 — ...
Contests: Small Towns Big Stories


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'Dark Descendants: City of Domes' is a low Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Epic book that tells about the adventures of Solem Zekiah Du'Tritz who was born inside the City of Domes along with his partner Alexiese Morgann Ce'Vieze. Their adventure starts after 5 years of being together in the Eagle Legion, the group of warriors protecting the City of Domes. Setting in post-apocalyptic Earth, 22nd Century.
Year 2200: Earth Status; air-toxic(Sulfur and Carbon monoxide too high), sunlight-10.1%(Sunlight blocked due to thick toxic clouds
-The last string of humanity has survived and created domes to protect themselves. (Big circular glass domes with large fan that filters air they breath.
They created 13 domes as their city and sanctuary of survival. But how long can they survive inside these domes?

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Helen Nice 06.01.2019, 23:16:58

wonderful

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Wondercyy 07.01.2019, 19:08:23

Helen Nice, Thank you

Anna Morrigan 24.12.2018, 17:02:49

I adore it

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Wondercyy 25.12.2018, 07:34:41

Anna Morrigan, thank you

Asha Kumar 23.12.2018, 15:08:02

can't wait for more chapters

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Wondercyy 25.12.2018, 07:34:29

Asha Kumar, thank you

Mydnyteraven 22.12.2018, 01:56:09

Good start, but it almost feels as if it could be a novel on its own. It’s a lot of exposition, and my advice would be to get more personal, and use closeup details. Maybe, not spilling your city’s entire history into the first page of your story, but letting it be discovered over the course of the adventure. That would be my advice.

The vampires though, very cool, I can’t wait to read more!

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Wondercyy 22.12.2018, 17:32:50

Mydnyteraven, Technically, it's a stand alone novel yes. it will have a book sequel(the book two). And an individual (stand alone)prequel in which specifically starts in our year to describe and narrate what really had happened before the characters in book 1 was even born. ^_^

Ann Swan 20.12.2018, 13:08:55

will you publish more?

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Wondercyy 20.12.2018, 13:14:31

Ann Swan, Yes. I was just having a delay because its christmas season ^_^

Drew 16.12.2018, 13:53:40

I´m impressed!

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Wondercyy 16.12.2018, 14:19:17

Drew, Thank you. I'll continue to impress you. Keep reading! Enjoy!

True Match 14.12.2018, 13:04:32

I am impressed by the way you narrate this story

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Wondercyy 16.12.2018, 14:18:25

True Match, don't worry, i was thinking of doing a lot of series after this one. Just follow me to keep updated. Thank you.

Michael Knight 07.12.2018, 11:32:33

nice first try!

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Wondercyy 12.12.2018, 23:40:31

Michael Knight, I will try my best to update regularly. I'm currently at the midst of finishing Chapter 9. ^_^

Wondercyy 02.12.2018, 19:17:35

I'm a newbie author, and this is my first book. Grammar errors could be seen. Feedbacks will be widely acceptable. Thank you.

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Wondercyy 07.12.2018, 16:24:43

Tasha Nickolson, Thank you. I do appreciate it very much.

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