Age restriction 14+
Revenge of the Past
Story about:murder, trapped, mistery
Age restriction: 18+
#22 in Thrillers & Suspense#29 in Mystery
13.10.2019 — ...
Total number of threads: 6
Well, sometimes there's too much narration and exposition, and other times, there's not enough description. Not to mention, some of the chapters are way too short. But, the mystery is unpredictable and interesting to read. So, yeah, the story is going good, not sure about the rest yet. The characters each have something to do in the story structure. I'm not sure what the villain's motivations are or who they are, though, either. I'm also not sure if it'd be a good thing if we knew their motivation or not.
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Stipe Lozina, I've noticed that on the last page, but thanks for the clarification. Shame the rest won't be on Litnet, but I'm intrigued by its sequel. I'm also glad there's some answers in regards to the villain, but not all the questions will be answered yet. So, it leaves it open in a sense.
Eric Phillips, Thank you my friend.
Nice hook... Like your short chapters style...
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in the chapter one hour later there is no text
Stipe Lozina, Oh, I thought it was a mistake
all chapters are too small
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Stipe Lozina, thanks for the information
very interesting beginning
Samuel Strock, Thank you for your comment, hope you'll continue reading.
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