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Deadly Relations

Veronica S. Lawson

Story about:
short story, snow white, fairytale retelling

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Rating:
7
18 15 328

Ranking:
#5 in Short stories
#11 in Romantic fantasy


Ongoing: 12 Sep 19 pages

Publication: 02.09.2019 — ...
Contests: Once Upon a Time


Description of book "Deadly Relations"

"Sasha you have to run. The Queen is jealous and wants you dead. She has hired an assassin to kill you." My brother pleaded as I stared in shock up at him.

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Hey guys this is for the Once upon a time contest, so leave a like and a comment if you are enjoying the story. This is a retelling of the classic snow white story.

Comments on book:

Total number of threads: 5

Sam Holte 07.09.2019, 12:59:03

I´m hooked

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Veronica S. Lawson 12.09.2019, 06:10:33

Sam Holte, Thank you I will certainly do my best. :)

Roza Csergo 02.09.2019, 10:52:42

Wow. I absolutely love it.
Very gripping from the start.
I don't want to sound rood, but may I suggest taking a closer look at the punctuation?
I wish you many reads.

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Veronica S. Lawson 05.09.2019, 02:03:27

Roza Csergo, it's really no big deal, I appreciate the feedback. Good luck with your own story in the contest. If I don't win I hope yours does. :)

Ariadne Roberts 04.09.2019, 21:23:06

it's interesting to read your vision of this fairytale

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Veronica S. Lawson 05.09.2019, 01:53:33

thank you. :)

Lizzie Dunlap 02.09.2019, 12:37:52

I've read the title and to my mind came my actual relations, they are also dead, so sad, hope this story will entertain me

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Lizzie Dunlap 03.09.2019, 14:05:35

Veronica S. Lawson, no doubt.

Ruechari 02.09.2019, 17:52:25

Hi Veronica part of the criteria for the contest is that the book is listed as SHORT STORY under genre. You can keep the other as your second genre. Thank you!

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Veronica S. Lawson 02.09.2019, 18:50:49

thank you for letting me know. I fixed it. :)

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