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Fallen

HypGothic

Story about:
magick, angels and demons, healers

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Ranking:
#25 in Romantic fantasy
#14 in Supernaturals


Complete 11 pages

Publication: 05.01.2020 — 05.01.2020


Description of book "Fallen"

Book #1 This is a story of magic, the cycle of life and true love.

There once was an old woman who looked after the animals, the deities and all of the unknown. It is a peaceful life until one day, a deity comes crashing from the sky, in need of her help. Fortunately her granddaughter is not too far behind.

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Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:38:46

I loved this first Fallen!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 11:20:15

Emma Swan, :) yay thank you xo

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:02:57

ch.1 Scottish lads... hmmm... But, why "babushka"?! has something to do with Kate Bush's song or you simply like the word?

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 11:19:38

Emma Swan, haha I think she thought that Babushka was a young sexy woman and liked the word & yes, there were no milfs or cougars back then :)

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:12:10

ch1. "Aside from her family *visiting her..."

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 11:10:52

Emma Swan, great. Thank you. I will check it

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:25:24

ch.3 "Anna's familiar *stew"

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 11:10:29

Emma Swan, oh brilliant. Thank you. I will look for that xo

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:05:30

ch.1 I like Eka, but... 7 days

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 11:10:03

Emma Swan, cool. It's a great number

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:04:13

ch.1 keep his body in the house?! ok, definitely creepy...

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 11:09:21

Emma Swan, I wanted it to go beyond the normal but the number seven is also magic. It is the number of the highest power, be it god or whatever it is. I wanted to show that she could not let go of him and that it was longer than most.

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:30:02

ch.4 the swan story... sooo romantic...

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Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 11:07:44

HypGothic, awwww...

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 08:57:21

ch.1 "She knew the woods well enough to know..." how do you think replacing "to know" with "to understand" just to avoid another repetition?!

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Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 11:01:48

HypGothic, :))))

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:34:20

ch.5 please, don't tell me that the gorgeous angel is here to take Eka away...

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 10:55:35

Emma Swan, the cycle of life.... Actually he is honouring her and returning the favour of looking after him when he was vulnerable

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:32:24

ch.5 wow!!!! this was fast!!!!

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 10:54:49

Emma Swan, there might have been some rumpy pumpy that I chose not to mention.

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:23:47

ch.3 oh, Katrina... he's an angel... It's understandable

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 10:52:54

Emma Swan, yep agreed

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:18:04

ch. 2 and Katrina came... I wish that her and Aonghus...

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 10:52:35

Emma Swan, hehehe

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:10:30

ch.1 oh, I see now why Babushka... the grandchildren and so on...

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 10:50:46

Emma Swan, ah yes and her originally being Russian. She starts a family in Scotland

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 08:53:15

ch.1 also, the repetition of the word "loud".

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 10:47:50

Emma Swan, thank you. I will look at that.

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 08:51:35

ch.1 try replacing "slowly" or "slower"... the repetition it's a bit distracting.

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HypGothic guru 14.01.2020, 10:47:36

Emma Swan, Oh good one. Thank you

Emma Swan guru 14.01.2020, 09:31:36

ch.4 a warm kiss... yes!!!!!!

Goodness Shadrach guru 11.01.2020, 11:36:38

interesting, rushed but interesting. I enjoyed it. going for the sequel now : )

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HypGothic guru 11.01.2020, 12:47:54

Goodness Shadrach, just a short story. I never intended for it to go further

Renuka Kadlag 06.01.2020, 12:59:47

i loved this story. Can we get more of this please. And keep going...

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HypGothic guru 07.01.2020, 00:43:38

Renuka Kadlag, I will, I promise. Please can you consider liking my page and book and you will get notifications when I do. I have been thinking on a sequel.

Lisa Lay 06.01.2020, 00:20:26

good story

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HypGothic guru 06.01.2020, 01:15:31

Lisa Lay, thank you. It came to me in a dream

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