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Grandpa's Recepies

TheAPwrites

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the story unfolds ups and downs in violets life

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#7 in Short stories


Ongoing: 21 Aug 11 pages

Publication: 02.08.2019 — ...


Description of the story "Grandpa's Recepies "

The story is about Violet where how her life changed after getting a old trunk of her grandfather
     

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Celeste I. 03.08.2019, 04:55:04

Well, grammar could use some work, and there's too much exposition in the beginning. But, I'm intrigued by the premise, and Violet has the potential to be an interesting character, as well as her relationship with her families. I look forward to seeing where this goes...

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Celeste I. 21.08.2019, 22:15:22

TheAPwrites, Yeah, ok, I take back what I said about Violet, I hate her so much right now. She's just assuming things, caring only about herself, and not wanting to listen to what other people have to say. This whole family is falling apart because of her! It's worse than the last chapter! I hope her shop closes, her employers find a better job, and she has to suffer and her family leaves-

Forget it, I'm sorry, but I'm not feeling this story anymore, Violet is seriously ruining this for me, I feel so bad for everyone else that they have to suffer because of a horrid main character.

K.R Webber 06.08.2019, 11:17:52

Just read all of it. It looks to have good potential. Plus I followed you. It will be really appreciated if you follow me back as well.

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TheAPwrites 18.08.2019, 23:34:16

Hi Part 4 available

Ankit Sharma 03.08.2019, 20:01:20

Wow! It's great Ap.. you mustn't waste your talent!

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TheAPwrites 03.08.2019, 20:36:17

Thanks Ankit

monika yadav 03.08.2019, 14:31:05

Nice one apex. Waiting for the next part

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TheAPwrites 03.08.2019, 14:35:53

Thanks Moni

Roza Csergo 02.08.2019, 19:34:15

Looking forward to seeing what's this story about. I added it to my library and followed you. Would you please consider following back and checking out my stories in return? Thanks.

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