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Immortals: Awakening

Dean

Story about:
family, epic fantasy, revenge

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Rating:
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3 11 384

Ranking:
#93 in Fantasy
#19 in Dark fantasy


Ongoing: 13 Aug 39 pages

Publication: 17.07.2019 — ...


Description of the story "Immortals: Awakening "

Lord Staimor Alcar, Champion of War would soon be forced to pay for the sins of his past. The mortal world must answer to the ancient creatures that had no place within the civilized world. The Five Kingdoms only hope is with a crippled son a daughter broken by war and a princess unwilling to accept her fate.

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Drew 15.08.2019, 19:54:04

amazing storyline, it's a pleasure to read it

Lozi 21.07.2019, 21:51:35

I see you're building a wide fantasy world here. But you must not put so much information in the first chapter. It can overwhelm the reader. Start off slowly, and build the world chapter by chapter. You are doing a great job, just a bit of advice.

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Alexis Danford 14.08.2019, 20:08:15

Lozi, it´s quite informative, I love to be informed since the very beginning

Andy Rose 21.07.2019, 14:15:59

awesome, can't wait to read more

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Dean 22.07.2019, 01:17:24

Hey thanks for taking the time to read what i have.

S.Ali 20.07.2019, 08:03:56

Amazing story! The excellent writing style. Perfect pros everything is just settled fine and firm and although the book is good also you are an amazing writer I don't think you know this but world is in need of the writers like you with their beautiful style of writing.

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Dean 20.07.2019, 13:03:51

S.Ali, hey thanks for taking the time to read my work.

John Mitchell 17.07.2019, 16:14:48

great story, publish more

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Dean 19.07.2019, 02:48:16

Hey thanks for taking the time to read through my work. Have now added a new chapter if u fancy giving it a read.

Roza Csergo 17.07.2019, 21:22:07

I must say you know how to paint images with words. Nicely done.
I added your story to my library and followed you. Can't wait for updates.
Would be nice if you'd follow back. Thanks

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Dean 19.07.2019, 02:47:05

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