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Mystic The Gathering

Ryo Francis

Story about:
mystery, conspiracy, horror

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Age restriction: 18+

Rating:
14
10 23 1188

Ranking:
#17 in Mystery
#13 in Thrillers & Suspense


Ongoing: 20 Feb 36 pages

Publication: 23.01.2020 — ...


Description of book "Mystic The Gathering"

A gathering for a selected few… only the inner most circle of influential people around the world are invited… since all of them are after one thing… the only thing they never have in their over-privileged lives…

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Total number of threads: 9

David Tallman 20.02.2020, 10:52:23

slowly, but steadily:)

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Ryo Francis 20.02.2020, 15:23:00

David Tallman, Sorry about my super short chapters - i have trimmed out so many fillers just to improve the pacing.

And kindly give a LIKE, i would really appreciate it. Thanks so much :)

Izzy 17.02.2020, 15:40:50

like it a lot!

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Ryo Francis 17.02.2020, 17:57:08

Izzy, wow... thank u thank u thank u :)

this new story also needs lots of editing, so kindly bear with my amateur writing until i get better — hopefully very soon

Jeffrey Nighty 28.01.2020, 14:31:21

chapters are short and easy to read, but I wish they were published more often

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Ryo Francis 07.02.2020, 17:11:03

Jeffrey Nighty, thank u so much :)

HypGothic guru 07.02.2020, 04:53:13

interesting

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Ryo Francis 07.02.2020, 11:14:31

HypGothic, thank u so much for checking my work — interesting in a nice way... i hope

K.R Webber 24.01.2020, 10:02:52

Cool start. You seem very comfortable with writing novels like drama or script. Frankly, I like that idea. It has cut down unnecessary filler stuff.
Your story is fast paced. So far, I like the story.

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Ryo Francis 25.01.2020, 02:35:50

K.R Webber, Thanks for the compliments :)

Yeah i just love fast-paced stories

Writing like a script is kind of my style so far — still learning how to write properly

Lawrence Frost 24.01.2020, 02:24:09

continue

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Ryo Francis 25.01.2020, 02:29:04

Lawrence Frost, Thanks for reading :)

Chapter 3 is out by the way

Douglass Millsap 23.01.2020, 13:11:18

well done!

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Ryo Francis 23.01.2020, 13:14:23

Douglass Millsap, Thanks :)

Josie A. 23.01.2020, 11:04:09

Great start (who is Jack Robinson, btw?) :-D

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Josie A. 23.01.2020, 13:05:12

Ryo Francis, I know the idiom, but you made me wonder who the guy was. Now I have to google it. :-)
And yes, it was funny!

Brad Emshwiller 23.01.2020, 03:31:09

Interesting start.

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Ryo Francis 23.01.2020, 05:38:30

Brad Emshwiller, Thanks — hope u can stick 'til the end of the story :)

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