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Narsus, Gabriel and the snow bear

Babs

Story about:
spiritual, spirits, japanese folklore

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Ranking:
#41 in Fantasy
#13 in Supernaturals


Ongoing: 18 Mar 6 pages

Publication: 17.03.2019 — ...


Description of the story "Narsus, Gabriel and the snow bear"

This is an incomplete short story, which has been sitting on my iPad for quite some time now, because am not sure if it is any good. So I thought I would post it here to see what people think. Please let me know if it is gripping? Does it make you want to find out what is going to happened next? That kind of thing :) I was thinking it would be great to get some feedback on what I have which is just the opening.

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Babs 06.04.2019, 15:46:35

I will be completing this story when I have launched Master Guardian Part One and finished rewriting the second novel in the series ^_^

Kessily Brunet 21.03.2019, 13:00:03

nice story

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Babs 22.03.2019, 20:01:24

Kessily Brunet, I’m pleased to hear this ^_^

A. Neeson 20.03.2019, 13:17:52

cute

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Babs 22.03.2019, 20:01:02

A. Neeson, Thanks ^_^

Asha Kumar 19.03.2019, 13:47:36

I think you should continue

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Babs 22.03.2019, 20:00:42

Asha Kumar, I’m so pleased to hear it and I am looking forward to be carrying it on ^_^

Clayton Terrel 18.03.2019, 12:56:34

interesting

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Babs 18.03.2019, 14:11:22

Clayton Terrel, Ooh I am pleased to hear that, do you think in is worth continuing? ^_^

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