Description of the story "Narsus, Gabriel and the snow bear"
This is an incomplete short story, which has been sitting on my iPad for quite some time now, because am not sure if it is any good. So I thought I would post it here to see what people think. Please let me know if it is gripping? Does it make you want to find out what is going to happened next? That kind of thing :) I was thinking it would be great to get some feedback on what I have which is just the opening.
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