Story about:dieselpunk, nations at war, esper
#5 in Epic fantasy#5 in Action & Adventures
06.09.2019 — ...
Total number of threads: 7
Whoa, this was a long, long read! Not that I'm complaining or anything, this was a great read! Where to begin?
While I don't know much about how the world, the mystery building up in the first chapter was well done, making it more ambiguous and up to interpretation for the time being. The rest of the chapters so far do an exciting job with world-building and character interactions.
Natalia has the potential to be a fascinating lead, and her character and relationship with Revu are heartwarming. The other side and secondary characters have the potential to be engaging, as their interactions (for the most part) have been well done.
The dialogue and narration are well written — excellent pacing with the serious and silly, fast and slow. While I don't know about the fantasy or military terms, but it's still exciting to read nonetheless, on how it's unpredictable and suspenseful.
I look forward to reading more of this, keep up the fantastic work~
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CardForge, You're welcome; I'm glad you found my review well done and detailed. I didn't think it'd be easy since I thought it'd be hard to describe it, but at least I did it well enough.
I can't wait to see what the future chapters have in store (I added it to the library too)~
they are still long haha
CardForge, we'll see
it helps me to discover universes, I didn´t know that they existed
every war begins and ends with deaths
Angel Lederhouse, Tis the hard truth.
what a long chapter
CardForge, well, let´s see haha
Hi. Just started reading and I find your work very interesting. This might be the first dieselpunk story on here.
I love the cover and the description too, they are both eye-catching and inviting.
This first chapter at 25 pages seems extremely long, but that's just my opinion.
I added your story to my library and followed you. Would you please consider following back and checking out my stories in return? I'd love to connect with you. Thanks.
Roza Csergo, Hey! Glad you found it interesting! I appreciate the follow and did the same! I'll try to check out one of your stories when I get a chance, still coming off one heck of a busy work week.
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