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The Carnival

S.Ali

Story about:
thriller, horror mystery, humor

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Rating:
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Ranking:
#17 in Suspense
#15 in Dark fantasy


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Publication: 26.06.2019 — 27.06.2019


Description of the story "The Carnival"

This book is about an early Carnival and life of those people who work their such as acrobats and musicians and dancers. To reveal the story behind those smiling faces that make sad faces laugh what is their life inside the tent of Carnival revealing some unspeakable truth and darkest secrets of the inside life of carnival presenting to you the amazing short story of the Carnival.

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Charles Johnson 27.06.2019, 20:17:26

all paragraphs are separated with very large spaces, should it be like that?

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S.Ali 29.06.2019, 13:31:37

Charles Johnson, and please if you liked the story follow me and hit a like for the book

Roza Csergo 27.06.2019, 19:01:42

Keep writing. You'll become better.

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Roza Csergo 27.06.2019, 19:10:56

S.Ali, I remember very well when I started to write my stories in English.
You have a long road ahead, but with time and practice, you will become better.
Just keep reading a lot, and writing even more. You will figure it out.

Hamza Memon 26.06.2019, 22:43:16

Sajjad well done i didn't expect such a novel from you i am just surprised and shocked

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S.Ali 26.06.2019, 22:44:11

Hamza Memon, really i mean you liked it

Roza Csergo 26.06.2019, 21:31:39

Hi. May I suggest using punctuation marks such as commas (,) and full stops (.)?
By creating sentences and paragraphs of various length you make your prose more enjoyable.

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S.Ali 26.06.2019, 22:07:46

Roza Csergo, Thank you. For reading my book! but I published it in a hurry so I just missed it all but next time after getting a really nice response i will take care of it.

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