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The Enchanted Oak

A. Tweed

Story about:
romance fantasy, mythical creatures, elven culture


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#20 in Romantic fantasy
#45 in Fantasy

Ongoing: 06 Jan 88 pages

Publication: 18.11.2019 — ...

Description of book "The Enchanted Oak"

The people that dwell in the isolated town of Sunny Side have always allowed fear to keep them from venturing into the mountains. All but Gabriel Ammons. With his mother in the graveyard, and his father an alcoholic, he wasn't like the rest of the population in town. He would soon learn that deep within the forest were creatures, long forgotten by mankind. Some of which, could harness the power of an ancient tree. The enchanted oak.

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Ryo Francis 05.12.2019, 04:51:47

Love your writing - so easy to read :)

Such a sweet, emotional story so far... Likable characters - i'm hooked

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A. Tweed 18.01.2020, 05:55:18

Ryo Francis, haha thank you. I try for the romance to be undertoned by the action and the plot. of course the two have a relationship but I want there to be more than that in the book. I had to create some sort of reason for Gabriel to keep pushing into the Ethereal world and making him a hopeless romantic seemed to work. More magic and action in the next chapters if you continue to read it. :)

Emma Swan guru 12.01.2020, 12:03:17

So, maybe, amongst the long paragraphs, you should play a little more with the dialogue. You have pages and pages without it. The dialogue would give some lightness to the page. Your cover's all right, but try to add the image of a character or two... just to catch the eye a little more. Oh, English it's not my first language, but I saw a few tiny errors (maybe from typing too fast) that you might wanna fix. Well, that's it from me. I hope I wasn't too out of place with my comments and keep up the good work. Next stop for me, chapter six!!!!!!

Emma Swan guru 12.01.2020, 12:02:48

I'm not a fantasy fan. It's not that I don't like it, it's more an understanding of the genre thing. With this being said, I've approached your book tiptoeing a little bit. But, TO MY SURPRISE, I loved it since the first line. I like the characters, Gabriel is so... American (Rodeo, Diner, working in the fields) which I like a lot. He has that way about him like he could be the next-door guy, quite normal and down to earth and a fearless hero, searching for answers even if that means putting his life at risk. I like his Grandad Paul (it's the kind of grandad that I would've loved to have) and I love the relationship between them. (and I kinda have the feeling that Paul knows more than he says) and I must say, that, for me, Elianna is already a strong character. (She's an elf, a warrior and very witty). I wish I had the ability to describe places and people as well as you do. So, kudos to you for the wonderful work you're doing with this story. I'll continue reading it. But, I have a few things that I think you might need taking a look at (maybe when you'll do the editing). First of all (and this is also my sin), your chapters are LONG, like really long.

Emma Swan guru 09.01.2020, 13:39:42

ch. 2 I really love the relationship between Gabriel and his Grandad and I hope that in time, the relationship with his father would change. Maybe the forest creatures had something to do with what happened to Jenni.

Emma Swan guru 08.01.2020, 03:39:21

ch. 1 - your story is so good! It got a hold on me since the first paragraph. I can't wait to read the next chapter. obviously, later I will leave comments about it, in the Book Nook but for now... well done!

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A. Tweed 08.01.2020, 14:54:00

thank you Emma! I'm so glad you enjoy it!

AnnaRCase guru 07.01.2020, 04:05:21

Ok well I read all your book in one sitting. um time to get obnoxious now, when are you updating:) 8 hours ago. Unacceptable haha.

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A. Tweed 07.01.2020, 16:37:18

haha thank you for the read. abd for your suggestions. I have considered making changes to the first couple chapters to include the folklore I just haven't been sure how to. when I am finished with this set of edits I will definitely revisit the beginning of the book and fine tune it more. :)

AnnaRCase guru 07.01.2020, 04:00:39

Well their relationship certainly escalated quickly :)

AnnaRCase guru 07.01.2020, 03:16:58

Talk about hard to get sheez ha.

AnnaRCase guru 07.01.2020, 03:11:04

hooded figures. this is getting good.

AnnaRCase guru 07.01.2020, 02:31:17

You may want to break the first chp up into three or four parts actually. Consider expanding a bit more on his Grandfathers tales about the elves and legends and maybe make it the second chp. I would be interested in more of the folklore and stories and who better than grandfather to tell them :) And then have the other parts of the chp into a third and possibly 4th chp. Then again these are all just my personal suggestions. It's your book, and I'm meaning to be helpful, not offensive or anything:) Totally up to you dear.

AnnaRCase guru 07.01.2020, 02:24:06

Hi. So just finished the first Chp. Nice and descriptive. Great insight into Gabriel and his life.You can't help but like him and sympathize. I would recommend breaking this chp.up. Its lots of info. A natural place you may want to consider doing it would be after his first night home, and start a new chp. the next day where he is bailing hay and his Grandfather tells him about the elves. Just a suggestion on my part. :)

Cathy Evans 07.01.2020, 01:19:35

Ellisna has finally gotten what she wanted

Lizzie Dunlap 13.12.2019, 12:46:46

nooo, she can't leave him like this

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Nickolas Harbourt 14.12.2019, 21:50:30

their story has come to an end?

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A. Tweed 16.12.2019, 05:20:48

or has it just begun? ;)

Hillary Owen 12.12.2019, 19:49:10

charming story

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A. Tweed 16.12.2019, 05:20:08

thank you

Marilyn Lucero 15.12.2019, 05:42:49

Hi, thanks for following me. I followed you back.

Wicky 24.11.2019, 17:55:48

oh, love it

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Wicky 27.11.2019, 20:58:00

A. Tweed, I have read it:)

Clayton Terrel 23.11.2019, 18:08:41

great story

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A. Tweed 23.11.2019, 18:17:31

thank you

Eva May 21.11.2019, 19:40:51

waiting for more

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A. Tweed 22.11.2019, 03:57:42

diligently working on editing so I can post the next chapter.

Kat Moon 20.11.2019, 20:16:30

good story

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A. Tweed 22.11.2019, 03:56:10

thank you

Roza Csergo 19.11.2019, 19:03:44

I love fantasy and this is a great story.
I added it to my library and followed you.
Would you please consider following back?

Miri Golden 19.11.2019, 14:01:09

interesting story, continue publishing it

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A. Tweed 19.11.2019, 16:43:25

thank you very much.

Marie Thomas 18.11.2019, 13:04:18

one chapter is too small

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A. Tweed 18.11.2019, 18:00:55

it's not finished. there will be many more chapters as they are finished...

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