Age restriction 14+
Story about:and contains spg, girl power, true love
#224 in Fantasy#29 in Epic fantasy
24.07.2019 — ...
Total number of threads: 2
You cleaned up the text pretty well.
Enjoyed reading the update.
Would you consider checking out my action-adventure fantasy Her Blood and tell me your opinion in a comment?
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Kk I know I will enjoy it :)
Hi. I don't want to sound rude but may I suggest dividing this one huge paragraph into smaller ones?
Also, would you consider adding punctuation marks where they're needed, like commas and periods?
Or starting the dialogue in a new line whenever the speaker changes?
These would make it easier for the reader to understand and to enjoy your story.
Happy writing :-)
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Roza Csergo, I know but I didn't expect my book to be top 3 so fast :0
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