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Karly 30.05.2019, 16:51:39

Hey! Just a little tip, not criticizing at all (i'm still new at this) but just one note on the newborn. In order to make it a little more lifelike. Newborns eyes are pretty much closed and they don't show expressions like smiles for at least a month and a half till about three months. Other than that i can't stop reading! :)

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Word_Adict 30.05.2019, 18:07:57

Thank you so much! I didn't evem think of that? thanks for reading.

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